[Token-all] observations letter version ready for submission

[Clifton, Judith Catherine]

Stefano, I read the letter - I agree from my side.

Judith.

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Sent: 29 July 2021 12:23
To: Carlo Harpes
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Subject: Re: [Token-all] observations letter version ready for submission

dear carlo,

thank you.
i put monitors as this was the term used by our po throughout the whole review process.
in case i'd change it to "reviewers" which is the official h2020 term.

implications of the corrective actions are obvious and agreed by all.

ciao,
stefano

On Thu, 29 Jul 2021 at 12:06, Carlo Harpes <harpes at itrust.lu<mailto:harpes at itrust.lu>> wrote:
Hi, Stefano,

I agree with your rewording. I only would replace “monitors” by “reviewers” as I thinks monitor is not the right term for our “auditors”. I did this change on the platform, but it seems to get lost…

Obvioulsy, this position also commits the leaders of D6.2 (?), D.6.3 (Me) and D6.4 to provide me input in due time, and to plan with me how to integrate this in the current document.

Regards,
Carlo

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From: token-all-bounces at lists.fiware.org<mailto:token-all-bounces at lists.fiware.org> <token-all-bounces at lists.fiware.org<mailto:token-all-bounces at lists.fiware.org>> On Behalf Of Stefano De Panfilis
Sent: 29 July 2021 11:37
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Subject: [Token-all] observations letter version ready for submission

dear all,

as agreed here is the link to the final version as resulted from our fruitful meeting of yesterday: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xBmSbyKSYhuZCRsm4f3NvaUiKyfcjwLzDOttLa01Z4o/edit#heading=h.gjdgxs

please provide your comments/suggestions for improvement, only in this version, by tomorrow 12:00 at the very latest. at that time i'll submit to our po.
i gave the "commenter" right to all of you to facilitate you to provide comments through the suggestion mode.

thank you in advance for your kind collaboration on the matter.

ciao,
stefano

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