[Token-wp6] Wp6 feedback for the y2report

Karen Vega karen.vega at fiware.org
Sat Apr 30 09:15:58 CEST 2022


Dear Adnan
I checked the inputs for wp6 report thanks for that , apologies that i just
can send this now.

On the inputs on p.26-27 of our due report in concern

1. If the wp.objective 1say we aim to support the sustainability of the
PUCs. And we aim to get definition of the innovation products , i saw it
was written ." Encouraging the tool developer... " Not sure what this means
i catch that its about radar but maybe you can support in  finding a
catchier way to say this.

On objective#2 . i think a great achievement is the demo.as part of the
early adopters strategy.  So demo is crucial.to be mentioned  i have
written something brief on it on the executive summary for this report that
is due, so you can take that to add to what you have

2.
I think we should revisit last general project review consolidated report,
 and remeber whatbwas their feedback on this wp6 , so the pic is attached,
its also on the drive on wp7 .
So id suggest to say more crisply what we did in the period to contest
those comments just to be on safe side.

3. Would be great if you could use some lines from  6.1  section on
introduction/executive summary would be great.

Unfortunately i will be away next week. Was bad timing for travel that i
had already booked colliding with last minute PO requests. Ill be available
on may 10th

Thanks very much for your engagement
K
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