Dear Mikko, Thank you very much for the draft proposal text. I have realized that you are using size 10. Check if this valid, since I think that the minimum font size they require is 11, and this could create problems later on about the total number of pages of the proposal, which should not be higher than 70. You include a section called Innovation Potential of Transversal Partners - EACH PARTNER. There you say that this text could also be in Section 4 under exploitation plans. Can you clarify? Since you have already included the innovation potential of the reference zones I would rather go to include this input under exploitation plans directly. This will not generate unnecessary pages and you can include the reference in the document so that no one claims that this is not addressed by the proposal. By the way, since I assume you are not taking more inputs from google drive but Sections 4 and 5 are not included in this word document, I attach Atos exploitation plan so that you copy the text to the corresponding word file. Please, tell me if adjustments on the size are needed. Best regards, Nuria de Lama Research & Innovation ICT Program Manager Vice-Secretary General Big Data Value Association M +34 680645692 T +34 91214 9321 F +34 91754 3252 nuria.delama at atos.net<mailto:nuria.delama at atos.net> Albarracín 25 28037 Madrid Spain www.atosresearch.eu<http://www.atosresearch.eu/> es.atos.net [cid:image002.png at 01D18DE6.4402BE40] Feel free to download our booklet at http://atos.net/en-us/home/we-are/insights-innovation/research-and-innovation.html From: fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org [mailto:fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org] On Behalf Of Riepula Mikko Sent: Friday, April 01, 2016 7:46 PM To: Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org Subject: [oasc-iot-lsp-cities] First interim draft version of our proposal Dear all, Attached is an interim version of the proposal, still very much work in progress. Expect a better one from myself and Martin on Monday. (I need to still include the ref. zone descriptions (somtething like 16 pp.) and Martin will make his edits while going through it over the weekend.) As you can see, a lot of work still remains, and that is up to each partner. Please note that any changes made to google docs this afternoon would probably no be reflected in the text, which now lives as a MS Word document. So don’t edit in Google. Names in parentheses after each major Chapter indicate the respective Chapter Editors who will then, beginning on Monday, start implementing changes on top of the then-current version from myself and Martin. So effectively the file will on Monday be split into three Word files for easier parallel editing. Process: Please take the file and make parallel edits but then email to the Chapter Editors only the bits you have modified — remove everything else! (Do not care for heading numbering changing.) Do respect formatting with the Word styles used. Use triple-X (XXX) or triple hash (###) to mark areas under construction. Before submission Martin can then search for such strings and make sure no loose end are left dangling — at that point most likely by just surgically removing such bits. So do try to resolve them later yourself if you only can. kr. Mikko Mikko Riepula, MSc (Tech), Dr (Econ. & Bus. Admin) Project Manager, Post-doctoral Researcher Aalto University Runeberginkatu 22-24 00100 Helsinki (PO Box 21220, 00076 Aalto) Finland tel: +358 50 3837378 (mobile) ATOS WARNING ! This message contains attachments that could potentially harm your computer. Please make sure you open ONLY attachments from senders you know, trust and is in an e-mail that you are expecting. AVERTISSEMENT ATOS ! Ce message contient des pièces jointes qui peuvent potentiellement endommager votre ordinateur. 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