Dear all (and especially the reviewer who will take the token), This is the intro with the correct format, and in addition using track changes to see what I have modified. Feel free to add, check and change. Kind regards, Federico El 07/07/2011 11:14, Federico Álvarez escribió: > Dear all, > > This is the new intro to the chapter. I took the text which was > already in the description and I formulated a text that I think that > is simpler to understand (half a page + then the list of GEs of the > chapter) and where the general explanation of the importance is > shorter and with more data. > > I have corrected a number of typos and inconsistencies from the > definitions and listed them. > > Hope this helps, at least for the deliverable. > > Kind regards, > Federico Alvarez > > El 05/07/2011 12:25, Juanjo Hierro escribió: >> >> Go ahead ... Seems like there is not other volunteers :-) Please >> take into account Guy's proposed input and the necessary alignment >> with what we have finally agreed to cover as the scope of the chapter. >> >> For your convenience, I have uploaded on the FusionForge server the >> integrated version generated by Guy. >> >> Thanks and BR, >> >> -- Juanjo >> >> On 05/07/11 09:13, Federico Álvarez wrote: >>> Dear Juanjo, all, >>> >>> If no other volunteer, I can try to propose 1/2 page using some of >>> the text which is in the DoW (thanks Guy for pointing out) + a more >>> focused explanation + some references highlighting the importance. >>> not only general text. >>> >>> Kind regards, >>> Federico >>> >>> El 05/07/2011 8:42, Juanjo Hierro escribió: >>>> Hi all, >>>> >>>> I have been rather busy with the review of the rest of FI-WARE >>>> chapters but now I'm close to finalize and then I will start with the >>>> integration of the different pieces of our chapter. >>>> >>>> Guy has volunteered to work on the integration of the different >>>> pieces of our chapter in parallel to my work finishing the review >>>> of the >>>> rest of the chapters. Thanks Guy !! >>>> >>>> One thing that I would kindly ask someone else to work is to provide >>>> some piece of text (no more than half a page) giving some sort of >>>> introduction about the relevance of data (including context data) >>>> in the >>>> Future Internet, therefore providing some sort of rational for the >>>> whole >>>> chapter. It's just blah, blah to some extend, but question is >>>> that all >>>> the other WPs have some sort of introduction like the one described in >>>> their respective chapters ... >>>> >>>> Any volunteer to work on this while Guy is integrating the rest of >>>> the pieces and I finish my work reviewing other chapters ? >>>> >>>> Thanks, >>>> >>>> -- Juanjo >>>> >>>> Este mensaje se dirige exclusivamente a su destinatario. Puede >>>> consultar nuestra política de envío y recepción de correo >>>> electrónico en el enlace situado más abajo. >>>> This message is intended exclusively for its addressee. We only >>>> send and receive email on the basis of the terms set out at. >>>> http://www.tid.es/ES/PAGINAS/disclaimer.aspx >>>> >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Fiware-data mailing list >>>> Fiware-data at lists.fi-ware.eu >>>> http://lists.fi-ware.eu/listinfo/fiware-data >>> >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> Este mensaje se dirige exclusivamente a su destinatario. Puede >> consultar nuestra política de envío y recepción de correo electrónico >> en el enlace situado más abajo. >> This message is intended exclusively for its addressee. We only send >> and receive email on the basis of the terms set out at. >> http://www.tid.es/ES/PAGINAS/disclaimer.aspx > > > _______________________________________________ > Fiware-data mailing list > Fiware-data at lists.fi-ware.eu > http://lists.fi-ware.eu/listinfo/fiware-data -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/old-fiware-data/attachments/20110708/905fef3e/attachment.html> -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: FI-WARE High-Level Description - Data-Context chapter - v1.0_intro_modified_FA.doc Type: application/msword Size: 4560384 bytes Desc: not available URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/old-fiware-data/attachments/20110708/905fef3e/attachment.doc>
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