[Fiware-data] Asking for help for the Chapter introduction

[Jose Maria Fuentes Lopez]

Dear all,

 

Please find attached here the Chapter introduction after ATOS review.

 

Best Regards,

 

Chema Fuentes.

 

From: fiware-data-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu [mailto:fiware-data-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] On Behalf Of Federico Álvarez
Sent: viernes, 08 de julio de 2011 11:40
To: Juanjo Hierro; fiware-data at lists.fi-ware.eu
Subject: Re: [Fiware-data] Asking for help for the Chapter introduction

 

Dear all (and especially the reviewer who will take the token),

This is the intro with the correct format, and in addition using track changes to see what I have modified.

Feel free to add, check and change.

Kind regards,
Federico


El 07/07/2011 11:14, Federico Álvarez escribió: 

Dear all,

This is the new intro to the chapter. I took the text which was already in the description and I formulated a text that I think that is simpler to understand (half a page + then the list of GEs of the chapter) and where the general explanation of the importance is shorter and with more data.

I have corrected a number of typos and inconsistencies from the definitions and listed them.

Hope this helps, at least for the deliverable.

Kind regards,
Federico Alvarez

El 05/07/2011 12:25, Juanjo Hierro escribió: 


  Go ahead ... Seems like there is not other volunteers :-)    Please take into account Guy's proposed input and the necessary alignment with what we have finally agreed to cover as the scope of the chapter.

  For your convenience, I have uploaded on the FusionForge server the integrated version generated by Guy.

  Thanks and BR,

-- Juanjo

On 05/07/11 09:13, Federico Álvarez wrote: 

Dear Juanjo, all,

If no other volunteer, I can try to propose 1/2 page using some of the text which is in the DoW (thanks Guy for pointing out) + a more focused explanation + some references highlighting the importance. not only general text.

Kind regards,
Federico

El 05/07/2011 8:42, Juanjo Hierro escribió: 

Hi all, 

  I have been rather busy with the review of the rest of FI-WARE 
chapters but now I'm close to finalize and then I will start with the 
integration of the different pieces of our chapter. 

  Guy has volunteered to work on the integration of the different 
pieces of our chapter in parallel to my work finishing the review of the 
rest of the chapters.   Thanks Guy !! 

  One thing that I would kindly ask someone else to work is to provide 
some piece of text (no more than half a page) giving some sort of 
introduction about the relevance of data (including context data) in the 
Future Internet, therefore providing some sort of rational for the whole 
chapter.   It's just blah, blah to some extend, but question is that all 
the other WPs have some sort of introduction like the one described in 
their respective chapters ... 

  Any volunteer to work on this while Guy is integrating the rest of 
the pieces and I finish my work reviewing other chapters ? 

  Thanks, 

-- Juanjo 

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